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                  Rhythm of butterflies
                                                

Chapter 1
FRIEND REQUEST
          Hi, I’m here to tell you the story of two love birds, I think you have read the previous writing of this story if you didn’t please read it again. By the way am not writing this story, while am saying this story and you are listening to me. Don’t mistake me as am lazy. Try to catch my point, don’t make any cross questions while am saying the story. Even you try asking me questions you can’t ask me, am sorry but you can ask me in personal.
         Okay let’s go to the story. Oh sorry I forgot to say you the important thing am going to say this story in the regional language. I guess you can understand this, it will be similar to the words which you read before in the short version of the story.
         Kathaiku polama ipoo oru morning time, Crows ellam athoda relatives ah kupduthu, sapda oru veetuku mela iruntha kaka va pathu “Adada inaiku kaka nama veetla kathuthae inaiku yaro varanga nu neanikan” apdinu sollitu kaila iruhta paper ah pathu padikaru oru thatha.
         Antha veetla iruntha oru piyan kanadi munadi irunthu mudi sevitu irukan. Apoo kai vachu spike vaikura mari sevitae thatha va pathu, “En thatha unga daddy thana mela irunthu edho sollranga veetuku yar varanga nu kettu sola vendiyathu thana” nu kaka vachu thatha va kindal panran. “En pesa matta pesu, naliku naan ponathuku aprm ipdi than un piyan una kalaika poran apoo than puthi varum, padikura vaiyasu la mandila mudi ya mudi mari ya vachiruka edho thenga kudumi mari munadi neetitu iruku”, nu sollitu avaru paper ah padika kuninjaru.
         “Aye,20th century man, youth ma youth, ithan ipo styles, Kalathuku ethravaru thangalai matri kola venum, ithu ungalukum puriyathu unga wife Mrs. Muthama Sivakumar kum puriyathu”nu sollitae mukuku kella lips ku mela meduva thadavi tu kanadila lips ah surukitu pakkan.
         “Neram valkaila ithelam pakanum nu, ellathukum avasaram ellam epoo valaranumoo apoo valarum, Intha 21st century messa thadi iruntha than gethu nu sollvanga athae nerathula”, nu thatha sollitu irukum bothae, anga iruthu oru viyasana patti, kaila oru coffee ah atthikitae varanga,”Ada Rama, intha thatha kum peranukum mokka podurom nae theriyama en uira vangurangalae, enna intha kudumbathula irunthu nee than pa kapathanum” nu patti polambitae varanga.
         Antha coffee cup ah thatha kai la kudukanga.
         “En patti, intha thatha va epdi than kalyanam pannio thrla pavoom”nu sollitae antha kanadi kitta irunthu chair kitta vanthu ninnan antha piyan.
         “Enna panna antha kalathula nalla piyan en kanula padala illati avana luv panitu poiruka mattena, ena panna neram”, nu apdi nu sollitu patti pakathula iruntha chair la ukaruthanga. Thatha va pathu nakala siruchutae. Thatha paper ah erakitu pattiyae moraikuraru. Patti thata va pathu lite ah siruchutu thatha voda thodaila lite ah tatturanga, thatha vum siruchiruvaru.
         “Aiyaya naan ungala sollala patti naan thatha va than pavoom nu sonnen, ungala kalyanam panitu padatha padu paduraru”, nu siruchutae sollitu rendu chair kum nadula poi ukaruthan.
         “Pechu ku mattum koraiyae illa”, nu sollitu antha patti avan kanatha piduchu killuranga. Apoo oru sound kekkuthu, “Dei Nithish enna panitu iruka mani 8 achu inum kulika kuda illa”, nu oru sound kitchen la irunthu kekkuthu. Clock la time pakkan 7.45 nu kamiku patti ta kamichu sirikan.
         “Pochu unga marugal ku kovam vantu naan odiruthan pa, okie 20th century people see you later”, nu solitu odiruthan rendu step eduthu vachitu thirumba vanthu kanathula mutham kuduthutu, “love you baby” nu solitu odiruthan kitchen pakkam.
         “Ivana vachutu veetla iruka mudiutha kondada mudiutha” nu patti solitae patti kanatha thodachutu irukanga. “Veliya oru ponna correct pana thupilla enta I love you sollranam” nu sathama sollranga.
         “Unga piyan veetla illanu thairiyathula pesuringala DAD varatum sollren ‘en patti than enna kedukurathu’ nu”, sollitae kitchen kulla poitan.
“Periyavanga kitta ipdi ya pesanum” nu solitae oru lady sapada tiffin box la pack panitu irukanga. Apoo cooker la whistle adikuthu same as busy morning.  
“Apoo epdi pesa solunga mummy solunga” nu sollitae anga shelf la iruntha bottles ah open panni snacks iruka nu theduran. “Intha vaiku onum korachal illa periyavangaluku mariyatha kudukanum”, nu amma sollranga
“Avananga en buddies mummy en secrets ah maintain panvanga ungala mari illa”, nu sollitae amma kanathula kiss panitu “TATA time achu naan en room ku poi kelamburan” nu sollitu poitan.
“Inum 30 mins la schl start airum inum sapdala kulikala dress change pannala”, nu ellar amma marium ingaium morning manthra oditu iruku,
“Apoo brush panrathu missing”, nu sollitae oditan. “Iavana vachitu ivan lam eppoo than porupa irupano thrla” nu amma sollitu irukum bothae avan patti, “Kolanthaiya thittatha avan kutty piyan valantha ellam sari airum”
“Kutty piyan ah avan! 15 vaiyasachu inum 5 vaiyasu papa mari neenga romba chellam kudukinga atha”, nu avan mummy sollranga. “Avan valantha sari airum naan pathukiran” nu avan patti sollitu irukanga.
Takkunu Bang Bang Bang nu song sathama athuruthu. Nama hero Surya fan athuvum thevira rasigan, but oru show kuda 1st  day theater ponathu illa epavuchu apppa kutitu ponna undu, pavoom nama hero, inga pattu satham kekkuthae enga aduvara nu nenaikingala neenga nenacha mariyae nama hero ku dance la intrest undu but self dancer avan room kulla mattum aduvan veliya theriyathu
Room ah pathi sollanumna pakkava irukum eallam neat ah arrange panni irukum nama hero crt ah iruka vendiya edathula crt ah irukan nu nenaikathinga avan amma than athuku karanam, veetla ivlo vai pesranae veliya ponna epdi pesuvan nu nenaikinga, papoom 1st day schl porran ennalam panran nu papoom, epdio kelambi vantan 8.20 ku  vantan.
“Morning sikiramae enducha thana saptu porumaiya poga mudium, schl ku motha nallae ipdi ya ena class nu kuda theriyathu unaku”, nu amma as usual thittitu irukanga, “Unga appa lam schl padikum bothu 9 maniku schl na 8 mani kae crt ah kelambi irupan”, nu patti old story aramichutu.
“OK OK, naan dad illa am different, 485 SSLC la, unga son evlo solunga”, nu nakala kettan. “Dei venam olunga saptu schl ku poiru”, nu amma sollranga morachutu.
“Relax, late ah ponalum 1st day thana, en late nu ketta class theditu irunthan nu sollikiran”, casual ah sollran. Veeta vittu kelambiyachu vassal ku than poirupan.
“Notes lam eduthiya”nu amma kekkanga, “1st day onum nadakathu ma summa ukara than vaipanga so note theva illa” nu sollitae oru key ah keystand la irunthu eduthu avaoda TURBODRIVE oda lock ah release panran. Cycle summa pala pala nu irukum black color than irunthalum apdiyae sun light la glow agum.
“Mummy tata, patti tata, thatha tata” nu oru sound kuduthan sathama elarum kekkura mari.
Pedal pannitu poran. On the road la oruthana pathutu speed up pannitu poran, poi damu nu oru idi binadiyae. Avan takkunu thirubi, “Podang o”nu solitae thirumbi pathan. “Machan nee ya naan antha kabothinga nu nenachan”
Apdi yae rendu perum meduva pedel panitae poranga. “En machi naan iduchanu thana o oda vittuta illana”, nu Nithish sollvana sollitu irukum pothae, “Nee nu therinja inum kaluvi uthirupan muditu vada beep” nu takkunu sollitan.
“Dei Sappa nama clz la yarlam irupanga nu nenaika?” nu Nithish kekkuran. “Evan iruntha ennna naan irukan la aprm enna?” nu avan frnd sollitu fast ah pedel panna aramikan.
         Sappa speed ah poratha pathutu Nithish speed ah pedel panran. Avan konja thuram ponan odanae, Sappa “En kudavae race ah, iru D varen” nu sollitu avanum speed ah otta aramichutan odanae rendu perum race poga aramichitanga.
         Nithish cycle konjam slow sappa cycle vida, Thidirinu patha sappa munadi poitan Nithish cycle takkunu stop aguthu Sappa atha kandukama avan speed ah poitae irukan,
         Nithish cycle vitu erangi pakkan patha chain cut airuchu, “Pochu en manatha vanga nae varuva nee unala avanta lam thokka vendiyathu aitu, sari thothu than poren nae vachukuvoom school ku kuda poga mudiyathae evlo thuram iruku ipdi palivangitiyae madaya, Ini unna thodachu clean ah vachukavae mattan enna mulika en amma than thodaipanga nu kevalama pakkiya” nu polambitae cycle ah kella pottu cycle kuda pesitu irukan.
         Time patha inum 15 minutes than iruku, ivanuku enna pananum theriyala, apoo avan cycle ah eduthitu apdiyae nadanthu urutitae poitu irukan, apoo oru white la paluchunu oru swift car cross panuthu avana idikura mari apdiyae poitu.
         Nithish ku oru nimisham heart ae niniruchu. Konja thuram than poirukum car avan cycle ah angiyae kella potutu “Pochu neramae sari illa, intha varusham velanguna mari than” thirumbavum cycle ah thitta aramichutan. Antha car angiyae nikuthu apdiyae reverse speed ah vanthu Nithish pakkama.
         “ATHHI devil pasanga car vachu pottu thallurangoo” nu Kathiruvan. Antha car correct ah   avan kitta vanthu break pottu stop aitu. Anga avan kathi muduchathum oru deep silence. DOOM nu oru sound nama Nithish biyathula cycle ah kella potutan.
         Antha car kulla irunthu oru ponnu veliya etti pathu, “Ioo, Nithish unaku adi pathrucha?” nu kettutu car ah thoranthu veliya vanthu nikura. Nithish thiruvila la kanama ponna pulla mari mulikan.
         Ava vanthathum konjam periya piyan college padikura mari irunpan avan, “SORRY bro SORRY en mistake than speed ah vanthiruka kudathu” nu sollitae varan.
         Nithish ku onumae purila, avalium antha piyanium pathu muluchu kitae irukan. Ava ena da achu un cycle ku va car la polam nu sollra. Antha piyan nama car than bro vanga nu sollran.
         “Excuse me SISTER” nu meduva Nithish avala kupduran, “Sister ah?”, nu solllitu saluchutu “ADA PAVI”
         “Bro naan Jeni annan than onum thappa nenaika matten en sister nu lam kupduinga”, nu antha piyan sollran. Namma Nithish inum confuse aitan.
         “Unga name Jeni ya?” nu Nithish avala pathu kekkan. “Yep, en da enna achu unaku vacation la lusu aitiya?” nu ava kekka. “Aioo illa am fine”, nu Nithish sollitu, adutha question kekkan “Neenga 10th la en class than paduchinga, enaku unga name therium but ungala pathathilla”
         Jeni annan thirunbi kakapuka nu sirikanga. Jeni ku kovam vanthirum, ava annan ah en da sirika nu kaila oru kuthu kuthuva, ava annan inum siruchitu apdiyae car kulla eri ukanthiruvaru.
         “Madu cycle ahh lock panitu va school ku time aitu” nu sollitu ava poi car la ukanthiruva pin seat la. Nithish cycle ah park panitu anga iruntha oru shopkeeper ta “Cycle ah pathukonga na evening eduthukiran” nu sollitu avanum car la front seat la ukanthan.
         Car ah start panni Jeni annan drive panranga, move aga aramichitu, jeni annan thirumbavum sirika aramichutan. Jeni, “Dei madu olunga ottu school poganum” nu sollitu Nithish ku pinadi poi ukantha.
         “Bro unga name enna?”nu jeni annan Nithish kitta ketanga. Apo avan Nithish nu sonnan. Odanae Jeni annan, “Oh ivan than avana” nu Jeni ta kekuraru.  Nithish ku marubadium confusion started, avan Jeni ya side mirror la pakuran, avalum ivana pakuratha pathutan, odanae takkunu thirumbitan.
         “Bro neenga romba nallavan nu sonna Jeni”, jeni annan Nithish ta sonnan. “Apdiya!” nu Nithish achariyama kekkan. “Thappu Bro ipdi lam iruka kudathu aprm inga ponunga namala palam nu sollitu poiruvanga” nu konjam nakal ah pesunaru.
         “Pothum rasa nee kettu ponathu pathathu nu ivana vera kedukiya” nu Jeni lite ah sound ah pesiruva. “Ena mari pasangala nambalam intha amaithiyana pasangala namba kudathu” nu sollitu takkunu Nithish pathu, “Bro ungala sollala thappa nenachukathinga summa pechu ku sonnen”.
         “Inum 5 mins thana iruku”, nu Nithish kekkan. “Ada ena ya nee inaiku class one hour aprm than start agum message pakkaliya” nu Jeni sollra. Apdiya nu achariyama kekan.
         “Bro don’t worry naan crt ah kutitu poiruvan” nu jeni annan sollranga, “Jeni ma un allu enaku intro panni vida vae illa inaiku varuvam la class ku”
“Avan than intha un pakathu la thana irukan pathukoo intha Nithish than naan love panren”, nu jeni avan annan ta sollitu ava side mirror la pakkura, Apo Nithish meduva thirumbi avala pakkan.
         “Ivana sema pavoom bro aioo sry mapla la ini apdiyae kupduran” nu sollitu “Ioo pavoom my kind advice yara venalum love panalam ivala mattum panirathinga aprm life ae pochu” nu casual ah sollranga.
         “Iru da en class piyan munadiya asinga paduthura una Revathi akka ta pottu kudukan thammu adikanu” Jeni meratura ava anna va. “Po D avalukae therium ava than daily vangi kudukurathae” nu casual ah siruchututae sollranga, Chi pae nu sollitu kela kuninju etho edukura.
         “Neenga enna padikinga anna” nu Nithish kekuran, athuku avaru padipa nipatitu part tym ah work panitu irukan nu sollraru. “Nithish puluvuran da nambatha college la oruthan kuda sanda pottu suspend aitan” nu siruchutae avan annan ah mandaila kottura.
         “Sandaiya” nu achariyama pakkuran, “Aiya nee vera ivan pakka than ipdi irukan but adika theriyathu, solla ponna una mari” nu sollitu front seat rendukum nadula thaliya vidura.
         Nithish thirumbi pakuran,  apoo ava rendu kanaium iruka muditu summa sonnen da nu solli kann adikura. Nithish ku ena react pananae thrla. Apdi pesitae pogum bothu school vanthiruthu.
         Nithish erangaitu “Bye anna thanks na” nu sollitu irukan, “Ena Nithish nee Jeni frnd ku itha kuda pannna mattana” nu solitu avarum oru pakkama siruchitu tata solitaru. Jeni “Nee veetuku po vera engaiyachu pona amma ta solli kudupan tata” nu avan annan ta sollitu avan pocket la iruntha purse ah eduthu oru 50 rupees eduthitu pocket money nu sollitu poiruva.
         “Va Nithish class pakalam” nu sollitu rendu perum nadanthu poitu irukanga, “nama one hour munadiyae vantoomae bore adikum elarum late ah than varuvanga athuvara enna panalam canteen polama?” nu kekkura. “Canteen venam class pathutu ground la ukaralama”, nu Nithish kekkuran.
         Avalum okay sollitu rendu perum nadanthu poranga, apoo ava kekura, “Nee ena Branch eduthiruka naan bio eduthirukan”, nu Jeni solra. “Nanum bio than eduthirukan bio rendu section irukum nu nenaikan” nu Nithish sollitu irukan
         Rendu perum Notice board munadi poi pakuranga, anga maths bio la B1 B2 nu rendu section iruku, “Nithish nee B2 la thedu naan B1 la theduran en name vantha sollu da” nu sollitu ava theda aramichuta avanum theduran.
         “Dei un name iruku inga”nu solitu ava next thedura apoo Nithish avan name enga iruku nu B1 la pakuran, Nithish avan name ah kandu piduchathum “Nanum un class than da” nu solitu siruchitu “Pottuko” nu hi5 aduchukiranga.
         “Nama class la yarlam irukanga nu papoom” nu sollitu rendu perum pathitu irukanga. Nithish theduran avan frnd name iruka nu anna avan name illa aprm than nyabagam vanthuchu avan commerce group nu.
         “En friends oru 5 peru irukanga un friends ethane peru irukanga” nu sollitu avana pathu kekura. Avan avala pathutu smile panitu, “en frnd orae oruthan than avanum ipo commerce eduthutan ini than friends pidikanum” nu sollitu rendu kaiyaium viruchutu lips ah veliya pithiki oru expression kudukuran.
         “Dei naan irukan da ena maranta naan un frnd illaiya” nu sollitu oru puruvatha mattum thukitu ora kanala avana pakkura avanuku enna sollanae thrla, “Unna ipo thana therium” nu Nithish sollran.
         “Sathyama sollu unaku ena theriyatha” nu Jeni avana pathu kekkura, “Enaku name therium but neenga than Jeni nu theriyathu” nu sollitu inoru side face ah thirupiruvan.
         “Adei naanum un class than da neenga ponga vanga nu pesitu iruka ini sonna aduchiruvan pathukoo, dei analum ipdi lam poi solla kudathu da name theriumam but face theriyatham epdi boss”, nu kettutu thaliya konjam keela eraki avan face ah pakkura.
         “Apdi illa frnds ellarum un name solli kettrukan alaga irupa apdi ipdi nu edachu pesitu irupanga apoo ketrukan enaku girls side pakka konjam biyama irukum athan ungala pathathu illa” nu sollitu irukum bothu UNGALA apdi nu sonnatha kettutu Jeni moraipa odanae Nithish, “Sorry sorry ini sollala” apdinu sollitu avan eye brows thukitu oru pakkam cheek ah mattum thuki smile pannuvan.
         “Gud, Un frnds yaralam sollu?” nu apdi nu kekkura Jeni, “Athan sonanae oruthan mattum than therium nu” sollitu irukum bothu mandaila kottitu “Naan yaru da idiot” nu sollitu siruchutu enthipa
         Oru mari climate dull ah iruku clouds sun ah close panni konjam irutta iruku, kathu balama adikuthu, “Dei rain vara mari iruku va class la poi ukanthirulam” nu sollitu enthikura. Nithish ava sonathum enthikuran.
         Pakathula iruntha marathula irunthu nalla kathu adikuthu. Dry leaf lam speed ah paranthu Nithish jeni rendu peru face lium adikuthu, Jeni kanna iruka mudiruva, nama Nithish konjam beku kannula thusi vilunthitu, odanae avan “Ahhhh!” nu meduva sollitu kanna kasakitu irukan.
         Apoo Jeni avanta “Kanna kasakatha water la wash pannu da” nu sollitu avan kaiya pidikura, apoo konjam blur ah theriuthu Nithish ku, konjam leaf Jeni hair la sikirunthuchu, jeni clip ah remove pannitu head ah lite ah shake pannvala apoo hair apdiyae kathula parakuthu.
         Blur view la irukura Nithish ku Jeni mattum bright ah theriura. Lite ah avan face la hair paduthu apoo oru nimisham avan heart ah struck anna mari feel panran. Ava hair la irukura leaf ah eduthitu irukum bothu ava bag la iruntha konja papers paraka aramichitu. Jeni hair ah vitutu ella flying papers ah catch panitu irukura athula oru paper Nithish face la oru paper vanthu tappu nu adikuthu, Jeni paper ah pidika kai vaipa takkunu paper paranthiruthu Nithish cheeks ah piduchiruva antha 1 second nama Nithish enna airupan nu ungalukae therium.
         Nithish thirutu mulli mulikuran, Jeni “Dei help panna koranja poiruva” nu ketutu ava adutha paper pidika poiruva. Nithish odnae thirumbi avan face la viluntha paper ah pidika poran, odi poi avan antha paper ah eduthiruvan, antha paper la drawing iruku,  antha drawing oru pencil drawing. Athu epdi iruku na oru walk path mari irukuthu both sides tall trees ah iruku, nadula oru couple kiss panra mari athula female oda oru leg mattum pinadi thuki irukura mari irukuthu avanga kiss panrangala avanga head ah suthi full moon  kela Jenifer.M nu signature irukuthu.
         Antha paper ah apdiyae oluchu vachutan Nithish micha konja paper mattum eduthutu poi kudukuran Jeni ta. Aprm lite ah drizzle aga aramikuthu. Rendu perum odi poi block verandah la nikuranga. Nithish avan Kerchief eduthu thaliyae thovathuran. Jeni ava drawings ah pathitu iruka. Oru nimisham nu sollitu pakathula iruntha oru pillar pinadi poi ninitu Jeni kannu ku theriyatha mari ninuthu shirt kulla vacha drawing ah eduthu pakkuran wet agita ilaiya nu pakkan onum agalanathum thirumba maduchu bag la vachiruvan.
         Jeni serious ah edho theditu irukura avan varapo, avan enna thedura nu kekkuran pesitu irukum bothae rain nalla peiya aramichitu apoo ava “Cha mala vera peiuthu ipoo naan enna panuvan nu polambura”

Nithish – Malai penja pidikatha unaku, enaku lam romba pidikum 
(Sollitu oru kai ya neeti thannni la vilaiyaduran Jeni mandai ya sorinjitae sollra)
Jeni—Dei nee vera neram theriyama comedy panatha oru drawing kanama poitu.
Nithish – Enathu DRAWING kanoomaaaaaa ? (nu vaiya polanthu achariyama kekkan)
 Jeni – nee en ivlo excite agura en drawing thana kanoom.
Nithish – apdi illa nama frnd achae nu..(solllitu medhuva thirumbi opposite pakkuran)
Jeni – romba nandri sir ini antha drawing kedaikathu so thirumba than variyanum.
New voice – iru jeni unaku naan drawing ah thedi eduthitu varen
(Yarda athu pudusa nu thirumbi pakkuran Nithish but jeni voice vachu kandu piduchitu thalaila kaiya vaichu ushhhh nu oru expression kudukura)
Jeni—antha pakkam pakkatha avan oru physo
[nama allu summa irupana antha pakkam thirumbi pathan]
Nithish – VINAY?
[Vinay na yarunu sollren avan athae schl la nama Nithish oda most favourite enemy, 5th std la irunthu orae class, Vinay ku Nithish ah kindal panrathu romba pidikum Vinay konjam bulk boy avan kutty don schl la avan class la yarum avana ethirthu pesa mattanga, avan konja color kami mudi nerya vachirupan thadi lam irukathu, nalla perusa irupan basically avan name Vinay kedaiyathu avan name Vijay Nachiyar, avanoo ajith fan athunala vijay nu peru la yarum kupda kudathunu VINAY nu avanae mathikittan]
         Nithish : Nee enna panra?[oru biyathoda kekkura mari kekkuran]
    Vinay Nithish kitta vanthu avan shoulder la kai vachitu “dei thambi intha varusamum nama orae class than da enjoy panlam” apdi nu siruchutae sollran.  Nithish manasula nenachukuvan, ‘Nee ena vachula da enjoy pannuva’
         “Hey Jeni wait un drawing ah enga miss panna sollu naan eduthitu varen athula yara varanja epdi irukum color panirupiya edachu sollu Jeni” nu stress panni ketutae irupan.
         “Drawing rain la ipothaiku wet airukum mudinja poi eduthitu va” nu jeni sollitu  Nithish kaiya lite ah thattitu munadi nadakura. Nithish angiyae  nikuran enga poga nu theriyama. Jeni “Dei lusu va na vara mattiya vela iruku da va”
         “Oh vara sonniya intha varen”, nu sollitu oda aramikuran. Apoo Vinay avan bag ah piduchu illuthitu “Dei ava un sister thana” apoo Nithish “Ahhh” nu vaiya thoranthu ahann illa nu solla vanthirupan pola odanae Vinay “Ammah nu odanae solita sister ah nalla pathirama pathukoo” nu sollitu avan mudiya kalachu vitutu poiruvan.
         Vinay avan mudiya spike vaika thuki vittutae meduva Jeni ponna corridor la nadanthu poron, apoo yaro avan kaiya piduchu ilukuranga. “Dei chalk piece ena da antha thadiyan kuda sanda pottutu iruka” nu kekkuran patha nama sappa. Sorry sorry sappa name sollavae marantan la, avan name enathu na Krishna Gopal. Nama Gopal thanga Nithish oda aruir tholan mothaliyae sollirukan ithuku mela Gopal ku intro theva illa, nama kathaiku polam. “Dei avan Jeni ya en sister nu sollran da”, nu solllitu Nithish avan piduchiruntha kaiya eduthu viduran.
         “Sollitu poran, nee thangachi nu sollitu vantala”, nu gopal kekka Nithish takkunu kanathula aduchiruvan. Gopal, “Dei me GOPAL da bestie. No beating only bad words  policy follow pananu da” nu sollitu kanathula kai vaikuran.
         “Ada chi mokka podatha ipdi pesi pesi than una ellaru Sappa nu sollranga konja neram” apdi nu sollitu Nithish avan kaiya pothu apdingra mari vaila kai vachu kamikuran.
         Gopal nenaikuran, “Ipoo naan ena sollitan nu ivan tension aguran, Silly boys”. Nithish apdiyae nadanthu poran Jeni ponna corridor la, “Dei enga da pora canteen polam anga nama Anitha teacher ipoo tea sapda varuvanga” apdi nu solitu oru puruvatha thuki EEEE nu palla katuvan.
         “Eva vantha enaku enna nee poi savu, enaku vera vela iruku”, nu solllitu Nithish nadakuran again. Gopal speed ah poi Nithish ku munadi oru kaiya neeti, “Enaku Anitha venu dot” apdi nu sollitu thalaiya lite ah kuninju moraikuran.
         Nithish kakapuka nu sirika aramichiruvan. “Dei antha amma ku kalyanam aitu da avanga piyan nama schl than LKG senthirukan” apdi nu sollitu irukum bothu. “STOP” nu sollitu normal position varan nama gopal apdiyae kaiya pinala kattitu thaliya oru shake kuduthutu vanatha pakkuran… ss u r ri8 flash back than solla poraru nama Gopal.
         Gopal right hand ah Nithish right shoulder la vachu avanuku pinadi one step thalli nikura mari ninutu. Solla aramikuran, “Oru 5 yrs irukum apoo naan 5th padichitu irunthan, valkaila ella pasangalukum oru teacher mela crush irukum apdi vantha teacher than anitha teacher, avangala patha odanae en manasu entiyae illa” apdi nu sollitu irukum bothae anga irunthu Jeni corridor end la irunthu thailya mattum neeti etti pathutu kai kamikura.
         Meduva Gopal kaiya eduthitu avan sathaame illama apdiyae odiruvan. Gopal avan ponathu kuda theriyama inum cealing ah pathitu avan history ah sollitu irukan, Nithish cross panrapo oru lady nalla colour ah irupanga oru full frame specs potrukanga avangaluku dimple cheeks, so avanga epavu lite ah smile oda irupanga, avanga kaila rendu books vachirukanga, she is in saree, avanga hair style patha nama dharmadurai thamanah mari iruku athukaga thamana level ku imagine pannirathinga.
         Antha mam vantha thu kuda theriyama Gopal sollitu irukan, “Mam enaku clz edukum bothelam naan nalla gavanipan” apdi nu sollitu oru kutty pause kuduthitu, “cha cha ena oru mam ena oru alagi ava thada enaku elamae, enaku phyics eduthanga paru athu enaku kedacha periya varam” apdinu sollitu irukan antha lady vandhu lips ah lite ah fold panni wet pannranga, apdiyae sundu veral ah mattum kadikuranga, meduva gopal kitta poranga.
         Apoo Gopal thirumbi ninutu sollitu irunthan apdiyae oru full swing la thirumbitu, “I love YOU mam” nu sollitu patha Nithish ah kanoom, patha oru lady,antha lady biyathula kaila vachiruntha books ellam kella drop paniruvanga, ava eyebrows ah lift pannitu eyes ah blink pannitu avana pakkuranga.
         Gopal  eyes ah bink pannuran countious ah with small pause. Avan blink panathum antha lady fast ah blink pannuva. “Annnnn” nu aluga varamalae aluthutu  “Nee en D inga vantha?” nu kathuran nama Gopal. Antha lady “Shu shu shu satham podatha” nu meduva husky ya pesura antha lady. Gopal kekkama inu kathuran, “Yaru nee enakae order podura nee enna avlo periya ivala” apdi nu katturan. Antha lady avan kaiya piduchitu “PLEASE” nu sonnathu, oru nimiasam Gopal freeze airuvan meduva salaiva mulunguvan.
         Ena achoo takkunu head ah shake pannitu kai ya otharitu, “Nee sonna lam kekka mudiyathu poo” nu sllitu thirumbuvan. Thirumbuna odanae anga oru bulk ah oruthar nipparu. Avaru belly mattum jackfruit size la irukum. Bald head aprm oru soda putti kanadi.. potutu karupa biyangrama iruparu. Avar gopal ah melum keelum pathitu “Umm” nu oru morattu sound kudu paru.
         “Sir I not do it Principal sir, it is she sir, she is beating me sir, save me sir”  nu Gopal enamo olaruvan, Principal marubadium “Umm” nu oru sound kuduthathum avan amaithi airuvan, aprm princi, “Miss. Rekka neenga ipo than 1st class handle panna poringa intha mari pasanga la pavam pakathinga nalla aduchu thiruthunga” nu sollitu gopal pakkan thirumbitu
         “Learn ENGLISH first then you talk to I”, nu sollitu princi nadakaru. “Enathu nee class edukuriya!!”, nu achariyama vaiya polakuran , “Yes” nu sollitu Rekka shoulder ah lift pannra. “Am specially appointed with my fathers recommendation, so am special for Principal” nu sollitu oru blink pannura.
         “Amma nee enna subject edukura?” apdinu ketutu irukum bothu, avan kaiya pinch pannitu “oru staff apdi nu mariyatha kuda kudakma ava iva nu pesitu iruka” nu keekura Reeka, “Ahhh manichukoo manichukooo vitruuu” nu kathuran, “Enada inu mariyatha varla” apdi nu sollitu nala pinch panra, “MANUCHUKONGA MADAM Ahhhhhh!!!!” nu kathuvan.
         “hmm good I want this respect from you all time even you own me”, nu sollitu killuratha vitutu siruchitu lips ah oru pakkam lift pannitu TING nu kannaduchitu books eduthitu poiruva.
         “Enaku English olunga thrla na pothumae ellarum vanthiruvingalae”, nu sollitu thirumbi pakuuran ella side um pathitu, “public nu theriyama nama secret ah vera kathitu irukoom” nu marupadium polamitu irukan. Intha time la Jeni nama Nithish ah kutitu ponnalae enada airukum nu yosipinga, atha sollama naan epdinga irupan avanga kathaiku varlam.    
         Lets rewind, Nithish oduna incident la irunthu papoom. Nithish odi ponathu anga Jeni nikkura anga, avan avala pathathum ava, “Va va sikiram va una oru important person ta intro tharen” apdi nu sollitu rendu perum fast ah nadakuranga, sorry Jeni vegama nadakura, Nithish konjam medium speed la Jeni pinnadi nadakuran, anga ponathum oru ponnu nikuthu ava nalla colour ah irukura, romba lean kathu aducha paranthu poiruva apdi irupa. Avaluku rendu rabbit teeth irukum, ava theeth vachu avala asingama nenaika kudathu, she is cute in that way.  Avaluku kaluthu konjam neelam athae mari ava pechum konjam neelam than, sema vayadi.
         Ava kitta ponathu, Jeni “Sue this is Nithish” apdi nu sollitu Nithish pakkam thirumbi, “Nithish this is Sue”. Odanae Nithish um avalum kai kudukanga apoo Sue, “Dude, Sue na thappa nenaikathinga Susan ah than short ah sollranga”. “oh seringa”, nu sollitu calm ah vera pakkam thirumbi vedika pakkuran. Susan ivana melum kelluma pathutu Jeni pakkam thirumbi, “Ena D ivan romba amaithiya irukuran ivan athuku sari pattuvaranu thonala” nu solluva.
         “Aioo ivan than Sue athuku sari pattu varuvan”, nu sollitu avan ah pathu “Cool da Nithish” nu sollra. Nithish bentha bentha mulikuran. Sue odanae ivan kanatha piduchitu melium kella side nu ella sidum attura. Aprm “Enaku thonala” nu solitu munjiya vitruva.
         “Nithish nee konjam orama poi nillu” nu sollitu Jeni um Sue um etho kusu kusu nu pesitu irukanga. Antha tym la than Gopal anga irunthu odi vanthitu irukuran. Vantha speed la ivan melavilunhtiuvan, “dei ena da ipdi pethana odi vara” nu Nithish kettutu avan kitta irunthu 2 steps thalli nikuran.
         “She tutionu comu here”, apdi nu sollitu muchu vanguran, “Enna tutionu commu sheu eva ava”, nu Nithish oru kobathula kaiyalam thukitu kekkuran. “She tution comu know Rekka”, nu sollitu kuninju knees la kai vachitu muchu vanguran,       
         “Dei nee ena venalu pannu intha elavu edutha English la mattu pesa theriyama pesatha, mudila da”, nu sollitu avan right hand ah eduthu rendu eyes ku center la nose mela kai vaikuran. “Machan ava than da namala vida 4 yrs periya ponnu 3 tyms double promotion antha ponnu da”, nu sollitu again annnnn nu aluga varamalae aluran.
         “hahahaha hahaah hahahahha hahahaHHAHAHAHHHHAHA”, nu kaiya vaithula vachu sirika aramichiruvan Nithish. “DEI veri aduthu da mooditu iruda” nu oru mari kovaum illama eruchalu illama solluvan. Apo side la irunthu oru voice Nithish ah kupduthu,, athu vera yaru illa nama Jeni than.     
         “Dei class aramika pothu avan kuda ena da pesitu irukura”, nu kekkura. “Dei venam da ava kuda seratha”, nu solitu irukum bothu avan apdiyae meduva thriumburan odanae avan kaiya piduchitu, “naan pavoom da”.
         “Dei poda unaku than Rekka miss irukala enaku Jeni tha iruka”, nu sollitu avan kaiya otharitu poiruvan. “Rekka vachu naan enada panna” nu Gopal polambitu irupan.
         Nithish Jeni kitta poiruvan odanae, Jeni “Sorry Sue nai apdi pesitu nee athuku sari pattu than da varuva” nu sollitu lite ah munjiya suruki cute ah sorry keukura. Nithish siruchitu “Its okie Jeni, ammaaa” nnu iluthitu “naan ethuku sari pattu varuvan”, nu oru confusion oda kekkuran.
         “Actuallyyyy” nu lite iluthitu “Enaku oru asa athan nee athuku sari pattu varuva”, nu sollitu kaiya clap panra without sound athavathu just position like rubbing hands. “WHAT??” nu achariyama vaiya polanthitu kekkuran Nithish. “Ena pa naan enna solitan nu shock agura”, apdi nu solitu head ah free ya mela tilt pannitu kaiya loose pannni normal airuva.
         “Onnu illa”, nu sollitu avaliyae pakkuran.
         “Enaku romba nalla ah boys la oru best frnd venum nu asa patten athuku nee than crt anna allu nu thonuchu athan nee sari pattu varuva nu solitu iruntha but antha sue irukalae ava solra nee oru ammanji palam nu but enaku enamo una patha konjam KD mari than theriuthu”. 
         “enaku ithuku munadi ponnungata pesi palakam illa so naan unta free ya lam pesa matten nu nenaikuren”, nu meduva solluvan.
         “Apoo naan mattu ena ellartiu pesita irukuran”, nu ava sollitu irukum bothu bell aduchirum, “Hey wait wait” nu solitu konjam close ah vandhu romba illa lite ah than. “Frnds forever nu sollra”.
         “Frndzzz for everrrrrruuu” nu meduva orumai saluchitu sollran, Nithish. Odanae rendu perum class kulla poiruvanga. Aprm rendu perum class kulla poi ukaruranga.
         Class kula ena nadakunu namaku theva ila, but konjam konjam scenes mattu pakalam, classs kula poi ukantathum Nithish avan oluchu vacha drawing ah meduva eduthu pakkuran. Athu oru side la lite ah tear agi irukum, konjam kasangi aluka irukum but athulium antha drawing nalla clear ah therium. Nithish konjam antha paper ah spread pannitu kai vachu neat ah thechu konjam normal akuran. Athula oru ponnu kiss panra mari drawing irukuthu, antha ponnu oru piyana kiss panra.. two sides trees ah irukuthu. Pathway la rendu perum kiss panra mari. Antha piyan ava hip la kai vachirukan antha ponnu avan shoulders la kai vachiruka. But boy ku head illa. Head less ah irukuthu half drawn mari irukuthu.
         Antha paper ah konja neram apdiyae morachu pappan edachu irukutha nu aprm yarum pakangala nu pathitu antha paper ah marubadium fold panni bag kulla vachiruvan. Bag kulla paper ah vachitu Jeni thirumbi pakkuranan, Nithish 2nd bench la irukuran Jeni third benchla irukura, Sue tha pakathula ukanthirukura. Ivan thirumbi pathathu Sue rabbit tooth ah cute ah kattuva. Nithish lite ah smile pannikuvan.
         Aprm break viduranga, nama allu aprm than pakkuran avan class la tha vinay irukuran, aprm Nithish kandukama poitan.
         “Aye Jen un bestie poran avana kuptu edachu panalama”, nu Sue meduva Jeni ta kekkura. “inga paru avan konjam shy typ so avanta ipdi lam vilaiyada kudathu nee,,,(small pause) athu mattu ilama avan en frndu”, nu Jeni sollura. “Oh Oh apdi apdi nadathu nadathu” nu Sue oru kindal ah sollitu irukura.
         “Ena da avata pesuniya”, nu oru sound keekuthu Nithish thirumbi pakkuran, nama Gopal than kuptrukan. “dei va da Sappa class lam epdi pochu” nu sollitu avan mela kai poduran.
         “Atha en da kekkura ava enaku English edukuran nu vanthutu en uira vangita”, nu sollitu avan mandiaya sorinjitu irukuran.
         “Reekka akka pavoom da”, nu sollitu siruchitae thirumbiruvan. Apdi sollitu rendu peru pesitae poranga. “Hello brother”, nu oru sound. Thirumbi patha Rekka miss.
         “Brother ah” nu achariyama pakkuran Nithish. “Amma, Gopal frnd na enaku brother thana”, nu sollitu siripa. “Apoo naan ungala miss nu kupda venam la, akka nae kupdalam la”, nu smile panitae keppan.
         “Aprm pakkalam akka tata”, nu sollitu avanga kelambiruvanga
         Veetuku poitu irukanga apoo Nithish Gopal ku pinadi cycle la ukaruvan konja thuram poitu irupanga, pinadi ukanthiruntha Nithish side la pathutae vantan Jeni anna car cross aguthu ulla irunthu Jeni ivana pathu kai kattura. Ava kai kattunathum ivan cycle ah pidikama “Hi” nu over excite agi rendu kaiyaium vittutu tata kattuvan
         Oru speed breaker varum apoo pidikama iruntha Nithish oru height ku jump agi apdiyae keela vilunthiruvan. Thalila lam adi padala cycle la irunthu viluntha epdi adi padumo avlo than.
         “YEIIIII!!!!!!” nu Jeni kathura. Ava annan car ah stop pannran, Gopal um cycle ah mippatitu thirumbi pakkuran. Odanae erangi stand potutu, “Olunga pidika theriyathu”, nu erinju viluvan.
         Car la irunthu erangi vanthu “Avana en thitra avana naan than kuptan athunala than vilunthan”, nu sollum bothu ava monji apdiyae pavoom bola marirum.
         “Athana intha pasanga la thalli vidurathae ponnunga tha”, nu oru pakkama moonji ya thirupi meduva polambuvan. Nithish sollitu irukum bothu avan kaiya lite ah thattuvan.
         “onnu illa neenga ponga”, nu Nithish sollvan.
         “Bro vanga naan drop panren” nu jeni annan sollvanga, “Illa na lite ah than adi patruku veedu pakkam than naan poiruvan”, nu sollitu orukum bothu.
         “Shu!” nu sollitu eyes ah close pannitu, “naan sollren nee en kuda than varanu”
         “Illa Jeni en cycle vera edukanu so naan poren” nu sollitae avan kai kall ellam otharitu konjam steady ya nikkuran. “Un cycle enga iruku athu vara nee nadanthae poviya enna va naama car la polam”, nu sollitu Nithish bag ah avala eduthu car la vachiruva.
         “J-E-N-I”, nu oru stress pause oda name ah Gopal kupduvan. “Ena”. Nu keppala odanae avan “Naan vena Nithish ku company ku varava”, nu keppan.
         “Vada enna kekkura”,  nu siruchitae solluva.
         “I thank u”, sollitu EEE nu palla kattitu bag ah thukitu povan. Odanae oru sound, “Gopalll” kettathum Gopal thirumbi pakkuran, “Nee enga kuda vanthuta cycle ah yaruma ottitu varuva”, nu Nithish kettutu lips ah oru mari pithikitu expression kudupan.
         “Nee vara venam nu sonna kuda paravala, theiyavu senju moonji mattu apdi vaikatha kevalama iruku”, nu sollitu avan apdiyae thirumbiruvan.
         Ellaru car kulla eriruvanga Nithish munadi ukaruvan. Jeni apoo avanta, “Ne pinadi legs ah stretch panni relaxed ah ukanthuko naan munadi ukaruthuan”, nu sollitae munadi poi ukanthiruva. Nithish paravala nu solla nenaipan but avalae poi ukanthathum avan pinadi poi ukanthiruvan.
         Nithish ukanthathum car meduva move aguthu thn konja thuram poitu irukum bothu Nithish STOP STOP nu sollitu, “En cycle inga than iruku naan atha eduthitu poiruvan anna”.
         Jeni annan stop panitu apdiyae onu solama pappanga. “Jeni ivlo thuram vanthachu veedu varaiku kondu poi vitruvoom”, nu solluvanga.
         “Anna athelam onum illa, naan nadanthiruvan pakkam than”, nu solluvan.
         “Dei anna, naan venumna cycle ah ottitu poren nee car la ivana kuttitu variya”, nu Jeni clever ah oru idea kudupa.
         “Cycle ae repair aitu uritutu than ponnum”, nu sollitu Jeni annan ah pathu “Anna ithu adilam illana nadanthiruvan onnu prechana illa”.
         “Jeni nee venum na kuda poitu va naan pakathula en frnd veedu vara poitu varen”, nu solitu car ah off paniruvanga. “Dei Fraud piyalae inga yaru veedu iruku nu enaku therium”, nu Jeni sollitu avan annan thaliya lite ah thattuva.
         “Theriuthula aprm enna, veetla solanum na solliko”, nu sollitu avanga car door ah open panitu. Veliya ninutu naan poren car ah lock panatuma nu kekkuranga.
         “Iru iru naangalu vanthu tholaiuroom”, nu sollitu Jeni car lock ah release panra. Ava open panra action ah pathathum Nithish odanae Jeni ku munadi door ah open panii erangiruvan. Erangunathum avanga annan car ah lock panitu side mirror la kuninju hair ah comb pannitu, lips ah fold panitu meesaiya thadavitu, Jeni ya pathu “Bye, nee antha veetuku vanthiru”, nu sollitu avan poiruvan.
         “Nithish meduva nadanthu polam va”, nu sollitu Jeni avan kuda nadanthu pora, Nithish antha pakkkam orama poi park panna repair cycle ah eduthitu, meduva nadakuran, Jeni um avan kudavae nadakura.
         “Jeni un veedu enga iruku”, nu meduva keppan.
         “Inga irunthu konjam thuram than, but nadanthu ponna kastam, 2 km irukum”
         “Ipoo unga anna enga poirukanga?”
         “Avan avanoda luvr ah pakka poirukan porukki”
         “Luv panrangala?” nu oru excitement la kekkuran.
         “Luv thana panran, enga amma ku therium appa ku therinjalum onnu solla mattanga”
         “Oh Oh”, nu sollitu cycle ah nipatitu, stand ah nalla thukki vitutu again urutuvan.
         “Avanga veetu kitta rendu perum meet panikuvanga, ipoo on the way la msg panirupan avalu correct ah veliya vanthu ninuriva aprm enna panuvan nu enaku thrla”, nu solitu nadakura, nadakum bothu kai ya full ah swing panitu nadakura.
         “Apo, unga anna ellamae unta solliruvangala”
         “Konjam than solluvaan, but nanae nondi kandu piduchiruvan”, nu solluva aprm rendu perum meduva nadathu poranga. 4 steps ku calm ah nadakuranga. Street la kuda sound ae illa, oru tree la irunthu parrot KIKI nu sound kudukuthu, nadakum bothu close ah nadakuranga, then a little closer, ipoo rendu hands kum gap romba kammi ya irukuthu antha gap la oru thread mattu than antha gap la fit agum, apdi oru gap.
         Lite ah rendu perum feel panranga touch agura mathiri, but avanga realize panrathu kulla avanga hands rendum touch aguthu. Odanae Nithish konjam gap vittutu move panuvan. But Jeni face la oru reaction kuda illa.
         Jeni walking speed konjam slow agitu, free ya vittutu nadantha hands ah kattitu nadaka aramichiruva. Lite ah chill breeze ah climate set aguthu, sun light dim agitae varuthu, oru evening tym set agiruchu.
         “Nithish?” nu meduva slow ah kupduva
         “Enna Jeni?”
         “Unta onnu kekkanu, kekkava?”
         “Ena ipdi kekkura kellu Jeni”, nu solitu avan meduva ava kanna pakuran.
         “Enada intha ponnu ipdi pesura? Nu inaiku nee epovachu nenachiya”
         “Chi apdilam illa, naan en apdi nenaika poren”
         “Actual ah enaku 1st ae unta pesanum nu asaiya iruku but nee romba pesa mattiya so naanu pesala”, nu sollitu lite ah smile pannuva.
         “Naan pesa matten nu illa enaku pesa pidikum but girls ah patha pesa varathu”, nu solitu ear kitta mandaiya soriuran for 2 sec.
         “Nama frnds ah irupoom enna solra”, nu Jeni ketutu eyeball ah Nithish pakkam rotate panra.
         “Oh irukalamae aprm nee than pavoom naan pesiyae savadipan”
         “Ha ha bet vachukalam yaru yara pesi savadikuranga nu”, nu solitu rendu perum siruchitu irukanga
         Apdiyae nadanthitu irukum pothu Nithish “Jeni Ipoo naan konjam over ah peseta nee ena thappa nenaika mattala” nu solitu lite ah blink pannuran.
         “Cha cha naan apdilam panna matten”, nu sollitu rendu perum nadakuranga. Oru street corner ku vathiruvanga pesitae, anga vanthathum odanae Nithish, “JENI” nu sollitu cycle ah nipatitu niniruvan.
         “Enada ninuta veedu vanta?” nu kekkura
         “Actual ah ini nee en kuda vara venam ae”, nu meduva pavoom bola munji vachitu solluvan.
         Jeni kaiya stretch pannitu epdina kai rendium viruchu, “Ok”, nu sollitu hands ah tie pannikuva.
         “SORRY SORRY SORRY thappa nenachukatha enga veetla konjam strict so nee vantha aprm edachu soluvanga athan matha padi vera onnu illa”, nu sollitu eyebrows ah rub pannuvan.
         “It’s okie da onnu ila”, nu siruchutae solluva
         Jeni vantha route la nadaka aramipa, “Nee thaniya poiruvala?” nu kekkuran.
         “Dei athelam poiruvan apdi edachu na en annan ah kuptruvan avan vanthiruvan, enaku intha area palakam than, en annan luvr pakka neriya tym vanthirukan”, nu sollitu siripa.
         “Sari bye”, nu sollitu ivan thirumbuvan. Odanae again thirumbi “Hey Jeni inaiku un Fb id ku friend request kudukava?” nu kekkuran, avan kekkum bothu Nithish ku konjam shivering ah feel panuran cycle handle ah tight ah hold panikuran.
         “Ha HA ha”, nu siruchitu, “Lusu lusu kudu”, nu solitu ava right hand ah vaila vachu siripa control panikuva.
         Jeni siruchitae thirumbuva, odanae Nithish, “Aye kudu na epdi kuduka? ID sollu”
         “Kandu pidichu kudu da eruma”, nu solitu ava thirumbi poiruva.
         Ava konja steps poirupa, Nithish cycle ah stand pottutu Jeni ya kuputu ava kitta odi poran.
         “Dei ena achu?”
         “Nee en kuda va veeda kaikuren”, nu siruchitae solluvan
         “Woow sema va va polam”
         “But veetuku veliya mattu than”, nu solitu winkle with tounghs out emoji mathiri face reaction kudupan.
         “Ada pakki seri vanthu thola”
         “Wait Wait naan munadi poren nee konjam gap vittu va naan entha veetuku kulla poren nu pathitu u go”, sollitu eyebrows ah lift panran.
         “Seri seri va va”
         “Aprm”, nu sola start panuvan.
         “Dei muditu munadi poda naan pinadi varen liana naan poiruvan pathukoo”, nu oru kovamum ilama comedy um illama oru tone la solluva.
         “Ok ok va”, nu solitu avan cycle stand ah eduthitu nadakuran
         Avan munadi nadakuran, meduva thirumbi pakuran, Jeni casual ah nadakura enamo daily nadakura street mathiri. Nithish full pressure la irukuran avala apo apo thirumbi pakuran.
         Aprm left side, yellow paint la oru veedu varuthu, anga stand potutu, antha home gate ah open pannuran, panitu cycle ah veetuku ulla viduran.
         Jeni veetu opposite la gate kitta cross pannura, gate kitta vanta, Nithish gate ah close panna gate kitta nikuran, slow motion la left eye ah wrinkle pannuva, ivanu right eye ah wrinkle pannuran.
Apoo chillu nu kattu adikuthu, tree la irunthu oru leaf meduva fall aguthu antha leaf meduva Jeni thalila viluthu, ava leaf ah feel panitu, ava thaliya kuninju thatura hair ah antha leaf ava left side shoulder la viluthu, lite ah kucham kattuna mari feel panitu head ah left side ah tilt panni oru jerk kudukura. Aprm ava vantha route la return airuva.
Nithish gate ah close pannitu irukuran, antha leaf meduva paranthu Nithish lips la paduthu, Nithish antha leaf ah eduthu kella potutu ulla poiruvan.
“AMMA naan vantan”, nu solitae shoe socks ah kalathuvan, bag ah keela potruvan veetuku kulla poiruvan.


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  1. Asom str😇😍😍seriously luved it....waiting for chapter 2😇😇😇

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  2. Good story bro.. Enjoyed it.. Waiting for the next chapter!

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  3. Its really nice and ur creativity is fab 🤘👌......eagerly waiting for the next chapter✌

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    1. thankq for you comments...
      i will finish it as soon as possible

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